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Random story doodles! I finally decided to put up one of me blah attempts at stories with this er... five page story! The grand epic tale of five kids' journey from the kitchen table to their bedroom window! :D Since I'm feeling mildly proud of this scribbly attempt (maybe because it was very fun imagining this child version of the wimpy weak white haired kid - and thinking how he'll grow up to be a certain happy womanizing warrior with a huge ego!), I figured I'd show it before I decide to hide to from all humanity. X'D

(Em... considering how embarrassed I get showing me 'serious' stories... I wonder why I always end up scribbling these?)

Medium: Brown pencil and tea on parchment

I'm sure this makes absolutely no sense at all, ne? Maybe the boring old background story shall help? (Ignore and skip if you don't really care!):

Up to the north of Harmonie laid the quiet little town of Mimbar - a sleepy little place of pretty much no importance, other than the fact that the Northern Commander's estates (and a tiny garrison) were based there. Since it was a port town, it saw a lot coming and going of people from the northern continent (and ships of all sorts!). Anyways, life went on peacefully there until one day Commander Falmar returned home one day with a relic called the Wind Orb. A relic of great power, it seemed to be, but he wasn't quite sure what exactly it was. Still, he sent word to the Capital that he would come and deliver it to the King soon. Before he could do so though, the town was attacked and burnt to the ground, the orb lost. There were almost no survivors.


Mweh heh.... I have very morbid stories, don't I? X'D

I'll upload the rest in a while in me scraps, so as to not overflood your inboxes!


Edit - Put the rest up!


Page 2: [link]
Page 3: [link]
Page 4: [link]
Page 5: [link]



Em... yes, I do appreciate criticism! I realize I be bad at all this panelling stuffs. (Ofcourse these are all very rough!)

I decided to give the ugly watermarks a rest this time soooo.... please don't steal and make me put them up?)
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Oooooh, storytime!

"The grand epic tale of five kids' journey from the kitchen table to their bedroom window!"

This made me giggle! :D

I once tried painting with tea or Coffee but it never worked out too well, the color was always too pale and blotchy. It looks so perfect when you use it though @_@ I'm amazed!

Don't say the paneling is bad, I like it so far! Especially the depth used in the first one!